Good to a point...

During the story line there are strange changes in interactions with one scene to the next, almost like you did something that you never experienced in the story line, or its a generic answer to a question you could have (but didnt) ask. Also about half way through the story one of the main characters changes from a woman to a man! I think the he/she switch Ruined the immersion for me, so much so that I stopped reading to post this as a warning. I like the story however, but the words and grammar are way off at points and need attention. So its Good to a point and bad too, do give me confusing plot that never happened. Like "You lost the officer in the commotion." When I never met one, and "I dont want to be alone again." When I never was or never chose to go off alone in the first place. There are many more "what the?" Moments too.

JKStones about Treasure Seekers of Lady Luck